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Developing Characters
My first book The Bootlegger’s Legacy was loosely based on people very much like myself. The two main characters of Joe and Mike could have been one of several people in my life. These were very ordinary people living somewhat boring lives dealing with mundane problems like money and family. They weren’t very happy but didn’t really feel like that was a big problem; after all nobody they knew was real happy; it was life.
The character who was at the heart of the story Pat Allen, the bootlegger, was not like that at all. He was a larger than life character. He experienced life as joy not a burden; until it was. There was also four strong female characters who matched their male counterparts in attitude and morality; with the possible exception of Pat Allen’s suffering wife, Bugs.
All of these characters and most of the people in my books have one thing in common, they are flawed. Some more so than others, but they have serious faults. Of course, that should be expected. The perfect person would not make a very interesting character in a book. Sure it would be nice to have perfect people as husbands, wives, sons, daughters, fathers and mothers–but would you want to read about a perfect person? Probably not.
One aspect of my writing that is mentioned by reviewers is the language. Some like it; many don’t. The words used by the characters are part of who they are. The gangster Giovanni would not be a soft spoken polite man; he would be loud and offensive–which he is. I’ve tried to match the language with the people and the circumstances. A good example is Mike Allen, the son. He goes through a transformation during the book from a more rowdy character to a religious reawakening. As a result at one point he scolds Joe for his language. Words that they have often used in the past — now were offensive to Mike. He was a new person.
Before I started writing I was a mega reader. I read all kinds of books. Some I liked some I didn’t. But I read a lot. Never thought to much about the process of writing; after all I was a reader and all I wanted to know was who did it? When I first thought of writing myself I revisited some of my favorite books and re-read with a different perspective. Several that I really had liked had a new quality I had not noticed much before–they were consistent in how the characters acted within the story. Each character had their own personality and quirks. They could do something out of character but as a reader you knew it was out of character. This may have been the most important lesson I took from reading to writing. Know you characters and let them be themselves.
I have written before about how characters almost write the book themselves. Once I get going and I know who they are I let them just be. I know that sounds weird but it is what happens–the story goes this way because that is what this character would do. Of course on some occasions I will mix that up just to make it interesting. But my goal is to let you the reader get to know the characters; who they are, what they think and how they will act; and of course what they will say, even if it is a few bad words.
Murder So Final now available on Amazon
Murder So Final, the last book of the Muckraker Trilogy is now available on Amazon. Special limited time pricing $2.99.
Books 1 and 2 are also priced at $2.99 for a limited time.
Free Signed Paperback Books and More ……..
New. Signed paperback edition giveaway. Enter contest to win a signed book of your choosing from my paperback editions. Go to the web site to enter. Will be giving away two books a month to readers who have entered. Winners will be selected at random. Nothing to buy just sign up and have a chance to win a signed paperback book.
This giveaway has just been running a few days–so far the two favorite books are:
Latest draft of cover for Murder So Final.
Release date will be soon. Once cover is approved should be days after that.
Marketing Blurb.
Tommy Jacks, experiencing success as a newspaper columnist, finds new love and old threats while covering the most brutal, ugly U.S. Senate race ever. The 1972 campaign in Oklahoma is between a ruthless oil baron, an idealist college professor and a reverend running under the God Party, set against the backdrop of a massive oil tank-farm inferno that threatens a major city. As Tommy puts it, “Electing lousy politicians is an American right—not one spelled out in the Bill of Rights, but a right, nonetheless. You just hope that the bad ones don’t outnumber the good ones, and the damage isn’t drastic.” But politics as usual suddenly turns deadly. The winner may be the last man standing.
Vincent Malone #4 is in the works; Durango Two Step.
This book opens with an amazingly violent accident which follows a cold-blooded killing at a truck stop diner. The truck driver causing all of this mayhem was hauling, illegally no doubt, a load of toxic something; and he was now dead. Soon Malone is in the middle of this stinky mess.
The Beginning

Tommy Jacks and Taylor Albright; Student and Mentor
Fewer Readers Reading Less
I grew up in an household where reading was honored. This was mostly based on my father’s love of books. There wasn’t a lot of family discussion about books, but it was obvious they were important. My father’s bookcase was held in high regard and given a prime location in the living space. Both of my parents grew up in households that did not have a lot of possessions. Books would have been a luxury. My father in particular was raised in very humble conditions. As his own new family became more prosperous in post WWII America he purchased books and they became his treasures, a luxury he had never experienced as a child. Coming from this background reading became a habit and a source of great pleasure for me. Reading books was something I just did, it was natural.
Taking an unscientific survey during Thanksgiving, it is apparent people are reading less and in many cases not at all. I have read the stories about the decline in hours spent reading books and knew this was happening; but it is still kind of shocking to talk to relatives and realize the new normal is to not read; at all. Not one book in years or maybe decades, I can’t imagine not reading. Of course, I write books so I have lots of reasons to be shocked at this trend.
And it is a trend. The decline in reading has been going on for a couple of decades. Lots of factors but the most likely culprit is TV. You would think the number of hours spent watching TV would have peeked somewhere in the past and leveled off, nope. It is increasing. People are watching more and more television. Some of this, I’m sure, is due to the increased options being offered, streaming services and vast numbers of channels on cable. With the average hours of daily TV watching increasing substantially in the last ten years; there is no time to read.
Reading, TV watching, smoking are all habits. Once you stop some activity the habit goes away and usually something else fills that need. TV apparently has filled the entertainment, information need of books. Many people will think so what, entertainment and information from TV is just as good as books. Maybe so; but most experts (whoever they are), say it is not the same.
In a article for The New Yorker, Caleb Crain observes: “In a culture of secondary orality, we may be less likely to spend time with ideas we disagree with,” (He) wrote. “I suspected that people might become less inclined to do fact checking on their own; “forced to choose between conflicting stories,” they would “fall back on hunches.” Note–“secondary orality”—(is) a sociological term for a post-literate culture.
A post-literate culture–doesn’t that sound alarming? To me it does. Our brains function in certain ways and it matters how we get our information. Reading seems to reinforce many good qualities about “thinking” that do not seem to transfer to such things as television watching.
I don’t have any answers to this trend of fewer readers reading less; but I do find it disturbing. And not because of book sales. I think it makes us less capable of deeper more complex thoughts. I believe we lose the ability to digest nuances in all sorts of matters, from basic living circumstances, to politics to personal relationships. I also believe we become more susceptible to misinformation; especially well-crafted propaganda.
Or maybe it is more simple than brain functions declining; it is that the love of books is disappearing. It makes me sad.
On a happier note—–
Free download of one of my short stories “A Christmas Tradition” is available on my web site www.tedclifton.com.
Thanks for reading!
Books That Mattered To Me

Reading For Pleasure
As an author I’m obviously very interested in the trend where people say they can no longer read for pleasure because they can’t maintain concentration. Great article in The Guardian that discusses this and relates it to our use of social media and our always on communication tools, which seems to teach us to scan but not to concentrate for very long on what we are reading.
Here was a key paragraph about reading for pleasure:
“One thing that many people who feel they have lost the ability to concentrate mention is that reading a book for pleasure no longer works for them. We have got so used to skim reading for fast access to information that the demand of a more sophisticated vocabulary, a complex plot structure or a novel’s length can be difficult to engage with. Like anything, single-minded attention may need relearning in order to enjoy reading for pleasure again, but close reading in itself can be a route to better concentration. To help that, read from an actual book, not a screen: screens are too reminiscent of skim reading and just turning pages will slow your pace. Read for long enough to engage your interest, at least 30 minutes: engagement in content takes time, but will help you read for longer.”
I know there will always be people who read for pleasure and who love books; but those numbers are decreasing. The ability to concentrate, of course, is more critical than just reading books for pleasure. This article mentions interruptions and distractions leading to a drop in IQ.
“In 2005, research carried out by Dr Glenn Wilson at London’s Institute of Psychiatry found that persistent interruptions and distractions at work had a profound effect. Those distracted by emails and phone calls saw a 10-point fall in their IQ, twice that found in studies on the impact of smoking marijuana.”
Dumber and no ability to concentrate on complex matters; wonder what that will lead to?
The final book of the Muckraker series Murder So Final will be available soon–most likely in November. Still a few editing steps, but it’s close. In light of the above article I started thinking about these books. You talk about a challenge, the Murder books maybe an example of a good story that some might find too complex. Not by design but because of the time frame of the books and the true nature of the story there are lots of characters. So many that some may find it hard to keep it all sorted out.
I’m in the process of putting together a character list with some brief info on each character–there really are lots of them. That’s not to say the story is confusing, just detailed. I think these books tell a fast moving story with lots of twists and turns, along with humor and irony; but of course I helped write them. This character list will be included in the “back of the book’ section in Murder So Final.
You should check these books out- I think they are worth the effort.
Audiobooks
AUDIOBOOK IN THE WORKS!
The preliminary work for an audiobook of Santa Fe Mojo has started. This is new to me so each step has an exciting but cautious feel. When you write a book, or for that matter when you read it–there is a voice in your head telling the story. This is of course very customize-able. As the reader you get to hear the voice you want–it fits your impression of the written words describing the characters and the scene. I guess to me that is the way it should be–you hear the story in the voice that makes sense to you. I think that is why reading books is more immersive than say watching a movie or TV. You help construct a key element of the book in your head–the voice.
Today the market for audiobooks is reaching the same levels as e-books and the audiobook market is projected to grow substantially larger than written books. Of course some readers will always prefer to “read” rather than “listen”. But as an indie author I can’t ignore this growing market. So soon my first audiobook will be available.
The process involves selecting a narrator. And yes, for sure, I’m not doing the narration. It might take years for me to get a clean reading of one of my books; and then it most likely would be bad. So the fist step in this process is to hire someone who knows what they are doing and who sounds “right”. Sounds right is of course very subjective. So this may take awhile. My guess at this point, this is probably a three month project to have a completed audiobook, but since I’m new at this there could be delays I can’t see right now. I will keep you informed. I would appreciate any thoughts you have about audiobooks in general or specific things you have liked or disliked. Thanks.
UPCOMING BLOG TOUR
Those very words may not mean much–but think about a book tour of book stores only on-line with bloggers who write about books. The tour will last one week and involve 7 blogs with interviews, reviews of the book and more. I will be giving interviews discussing my books, writing process and future plans–but never leave home. (easy way to tour).
LIBRARIES
Next time your in your local library you might request a paperback copy of one of my books. Libraries quite often honor these requests (there are easy ways for them to order one or a few books) and it would give you a chance to read the paperback version if you have not. An actual book has a different feel to me than reading the e-book–plus it helps me sell some more books. Crass commercialization. Okay, sorry.
























